Thursday, 5 January 2012

AS Media Studies Evaluation RE-SIT

Media Studies Main Evaluation RE-SIT
Q. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
For my media product I created a local news bulletin, before writing my script or doing any recordings I did some research on the way different radio stations i.e. local radio stations like Manx Radio, Energy F.M and Three F.M presented the news to the audience. Whilst listening to the news I made notes on the way the presenters spoke; they all spoke very clear and it was easy to understand what they were saying. This was one of the negative feedback that I got from my last recording, which was that my voice wasn’t clear enough and sometimes you couldn’t make out what I was saying, so this time I also made a note of this and made sure before I started any recordings that my voice wasn’t going to be an issue. Another change that I made from my last script was having real news but changing it and putting it in my own words. I found it quite tricky having to make up news so I chose news that was quite recent and re-wrote it. In news bulletins it always starts and finishes with a jingle so I added the same jingle as last time from garage band. This time instead of keeping the stories short and simple I knew that it would be more preferable to extend some stories especially the first three stories as they are the most important ones, this was what I also realised from listening to the different bulletins because when there is a big story it always covers most of the bulletins. This was how I developed the forms and conventions, by using these techniques, just like in real media products people who are involved in the world of media have to make notes, pick out the important parts then edit it and double check before it can go on air.

Q.  How does your media product represent particular social groups?
My media product is represented for the group of everyday people that tune into to the radio to find what has been going on around the island, especially vehicle users and travellers because they would want to hear whether there has been an accident anywhere or if roads are blocked so that they can take a different route instead of the same one they take every day. This leads me nicely to my next point which is the rise in fuel duties that I mentioned in my news bulletin, this would involve pretty much everybody because the majority of people these days have a car or some sort of transport and nobody would want the fuel duties to go up because it would cause a problem for many people as I mentioned on my script; parents taking their children to school and businesses. My second to last news story about the Christmas lights switch-on would involve mostly families and couples because it’s a nice way to spend a night out with the family and with a partner but for others it may be less interesting.

Q. What kind of media institutions might distribute your media and why?
The most obvious media institution that would distribute my media product would be blogger because anyone can access the site especially different media studies students can view my site and listen to my audio; it can also be a very useful for some students to get some ideas. Another institution that could distribute my media work would be at my institution where I study because, once again, it’s a good way to show and give different media student’s ideas on what they can do for their projects, I have always found it very useful seeing some else’s work (with permission) because it helps you see how the person planned and the progression they made to eventually having a finished project.

Q. Who would be the audience for your media product?
The audience for my media product is aimed at a variety of age groups. I first started off by letting my parents listen to the audio, and then asked for their opinion on whether it was suitable for them and if it made sense. Their response was that it made clear sense and most stories would concern them. I then asked my next door neighbours on what they thought on my news bulletin, they also said that it made perfect sense to them especially the story about the fuel duties. I also let some of my friends boys and girls listen to the audio, I got a mixed reaction; they guys found the first two stories interesting, but on the other hand the women found the last story about the Christmas lights interesting. However the most important thing was that I had news that interested the variety of age groups.

Q. How did you attract/address your audience?
By adding a story that caused chaos at a quiet and peaceful island would create tension if the news bulletin went on air, people would tune to hear what the cause of the fire was, where there any people injured and the latest updates from around the area. This was how I attracted my audience or would attract my audience because for a small island like the Isle of Man it is very rare that we get big news stories especially as dramatic as the first story from my script.

Q. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?
Whilst constructing my product on the Mac computer and my SONY voice recorder, I realised that without those equipments I would not have been able to create my local news bulletin. My voice recording was so hopeful because I was able record from a location that would suit the story i.e. the background noise. Garage band is very easy to use and it was straight forward doing my editing and recording my voice. The technologies that I used to create my product were vitally important for completing the audio, and I would definitely use the same technology again.

Q. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?
I have learnt a lot from my preliminary task. One important factor is planning, it is very important as I found out after finishing my preliminary task. It leads to a lot of time wasted when I got to my main task. Last year when I was constructing my main task, it took me too much time and was put in a lot of pressure to complete the work, this was because of the amount of time that was wasted doing the first task. This time when I planned my main task I had enough time to make changes which is why I believe my news bulletin is better than my last one. I also learnt that it is very important that you appeal to your audience which I believe I didn’t last time and that is one of the improvements in my main task from this year.


Tuesday, 3 January 2012

Media Studies News Bulletins Audio - RE-SIT

This is my news bulletins audio: Click here to listen to the audio

This is my AS Media Studies news bulletins re-sit. For this audio I used the same equipment from the last recordings, those are: my SONY audio voice recorder which I used to record the voices for my vox-pops. For recording my voice and for editing I used garage band from the Mac computer, this time the recoring didn't have the background noise that we could here throughout the last recording. For my opening and ending I used the same jingle. This time for my news script I used real news, apart from my first story about the May-fare (which I've also re-used) but re-wrote the stories. Before writing the script I kept on listening to different radio stations e.g. Manx Radio and Energy F.M from the Isle of Man and after that I had a couple of goes writing out the script. After checking it with my teacher and getting feedback on where I was going wrong. My first problem was the lenght of my first story which was the explosion at the hotel, my teacher told me that this story should be longer (aswell as my other stories) because it is considered as big news because a hotel has caught fire and people will want to find out whether the roads around that area will be closed because many people may take that road to work every day. Other feedback that I got from my teacher was my voice sometimes wasn't clear and it was too low, so this time I made sure that my voice was loud and clear, and unlike last time the news bulletins this time runs more smoothly.

All in all I believe I've improved my news bulletins compared to my last one. My last script didn't have a good balance, what I mean by that is there was more sports news that other news. This time I have a better balance by starting with the more important news as I have a explosion, followed by the Manx motorist etc. It gradually gets calmer until right at the end the last story is peaceful. This was what I learnt from listening to the radio stations carefull whilst making notes.

Wednesday, 14 December 2011

AS Media Studies RE-SIT

New News Bulletins Script:

Jingle introduction

I'm Edwin Richardon with your 1 o' clock news update:

ME
The May-Fare hotel in Douglas caught fire this morning as smoke and debrie scattered across    Douglas promenade. Recent updates say that the remaining people who were still trapped inside the building have now been evacuated. The explosion happened at around 11:am this morning. Local correspondent Mark Oldfield has more on the hotel:

Mark
I'm standing three blocks away from the May-Fare hotel where fire-fighters have managed to evacuate the remaining people out of the building, luckely no one was seriously injured and only a couple of people suffered minor cuts and bruises. The explosion was said to have been caused by a gas leak, I caught up with the chief fre officer Michael Williams:

Michael Williams
We've managed to tackle the fire, but most importantly, we were able to evacuate the remaining people safely. We don't yet know whether there are any existing dangers, which is why I have my men still inside the building.

What we do know is that the explosion was caused by a gas leak near the back of the hotel, and due to due to the size of the explosion and amount of debrie, we have had to close down the full lenght of the prom for safety reasons.

Mark 
The sound and strength of the explosion frightened many people, some who were only just blocks away:

Person who lives close to the hotel
I thought it was fireworks because the sound of the explosion was very loud, I mean... I only live like a block away and... it really scared me.

Second person who lives close to the hotel
I was in the living room with my family watching tele until I heard an explosion that sounded as if it was just three blocks away from my apartment... We ran outside and saw the hotel on fire!

Mark
That's the latest from the May-Fare hotel.

Me
Mark Oldfield reporting on the May-Fare hotel, a quick reminder to everyone just tuning in that the May-Fare hotel had caught fire this morning, the cause of it has said to of been by a gas leak, luckely nobody was suverely injured, however fire officers have urged everyone to aviod driving past Douglas promas it is closed for health and safety reasons. We will make sure we bring you all the latest on the May-Fare hotel.

Pause for 3 seconds (Me)
In other news Manx motorists are hoping that the planned rise in the UK's fuel duty in January does not take place. This could affect many motorists if the government increase the fuel duties up to 3p per litre, meaning an extra 1 pound 50 to fill up an average car. Over 100,000 people in the UK have signed an e-petition requesting for lesser fuel duties.

Isle of Man Treasury Minister Trever Richards says, 'If the 3p increase 'was' put on hold, it would be good news for drivers but bad news for his departments´ budget'.

Trevor Richards
We can understand why so many people are insisting for lesser fuel duties as it will affect many ordinary families, such as parents taking their children to school and businesses large or small, thats why we believe this would be the best decision to make.

Me
High winds and heavy rain have lead to the closure of the mountain road from the junction of Creg-ny-Baa to Ramsey Hairpin as the heavy rain and wind has lead to a minor collision between two cars near the motorcycle meseum, furtunately nobody was hurt. Director of highways Robert Harrison says that the road will remain closed for at least two days because of the weather:

Robert Harrison
The road is very wet and slippery and the wind doesn´t seem to be getting any better in fact it seems to be getting worse. As director of highways it is my job to make sure that the roads are safe for drivers to use, but due to the minor collision and the bad weather the road will be closed for the rest of today... but if conditions remain the same then it may well be closed until the weather improves.

Me
Police are appealing for witnesses to an event in which a car narrowly missed some pedestrians after jumping a red light. Officers want to identify the driver of a small, blue car who was accompanied by at least two passangers. The incident happened at the pedestrain crossing in Woodbourne Road in Douglas at around 8:40am on Monday the 19th November. Anyone with information is asked to ring Lord Street Police Station on 631-434... that's 631-434.

Me
Even though there's been chaos in Douglas today, organisers have said they want to continue with the Christmas spirit by having the Christmas lights-switch on running ahead of schedule tomorrow night at ridgeway Street from 7:30pm. The launch of the new outdoor festive 'Emporium' along Castle Street and Marina Road, scheduled for 6pm, will also go according to plan. Organisers say all other arrangerments will remain the same, including the singing of the Christmas carols in the Villa Marina Arcade before the lights switch-on.

Me
And finally the weather, cold and windy again tonight, with heavy rain. Top temperature of 4 degrees Celsius but close to freezing over the hills with the chance of icy patches. Looking at tomorrow and it will remain cold and windy with top temperature of 6 degrees Celsius throughout the whole day, and I do advise those who are thinking of going to watch the Christmas lights-switch on, to wrap up very warm because it is going to be very cold.

Me
That's the one o'clock local news, a quick reminder for everyone to be very careful around central promenade and to avoid going through Broadway Street as it is closed due to the explosion that happened at the May-Fare hotel earlier this morning, we would also like to remind you that the mountain road will be closed down for the rest of the day... make sure you stay tuned in for the evening report and for the latest updates visit our site at www.IOM/localnews.com

End with Jingle

Monday, 18 April 2011

My Main Evaluation

Media Studies Main Evaluation

Q. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
For my media product I did a local news bulletin, the news was obviously made up. In news bulletins usually the main, big, important news always comes first, followed by the less important news that comes in the middle and news that is hardly important at the end. This is how I set up my news bulletins with the main news about the Mayfare hotel, followed by the body that was found and the 65-year-old man who went missing and to finish off sports and the weather. As always in news bulletins it starts and finishes with a jingle and luckily I was able to find the perfect jingle for my news on garage band. Using these techniques I challenge the forms and conventions of real media products but also develop them in my own way by keeping the stories short and clear.

How does your media product represent particular social groups?  
In my news bulletins it is mainly the same type of news that all radio stations would present during the news hour. The reason being is because it’s the kind of news people would hear every day and if it was presented in a different style, then the audience would find it weird. By starting off with “A massive blaze broke out today at the Mayfare hotel” the audience straight away understand what this is about.

What kind of media institutions might distribute your media and why?
My media project would be distributed to a local radio station, reason being is because it’s a local news bulletin but if a radio station like Manx Radio helped to make it sound professional then it could be distributed to a bigger radio station like BBC Radio 1.

Who would be the audience for your media product?
The audience for my media product would be teenagers from the age of 17 to adults from the age of 30 mainly because the news is aimed towards both ages.

How did you attract/address your audience?
Usually in the Isle of Man not a lot happens in terms of big news, so because there was a massive explosion at the Mayfare hotel (which is only made up) it attracted my audience because they found it interesting. Also near the end when I mention about the great Eric Cantona that also had my audience listening.
What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?
I have learnt that it is vitally important that you make good sense when you are presenting the news. It is also important to have a perfectly clear microphone that would pick any sound needed and also kept my voice clear. In my case this was a problem to start when I was doing my recordings on an old Dell computer, but thanks to a friend I was able to do my recordings on garage band with a good built in microphone. My digital recorder also helped a lot in a way that I could record some friends from outside to make it sound like they were at a different place. And of course garage band and the apple computer helped me a lot to do my edits and set it out the way I wanted it.

Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?
I have learnt that it is very important that the stories make clear sense to the audience and also being confident whilst presenting the news, and also not rushing into the story straight away.

Wednesday, 6 April 2011

My News Bulletins (Complete)


this is my complete version of my bulletins. The improvement compared to my first version is the news that I read out. I made up the news instead of finding some news and putting in my own words and it was much better than my first version.

My News Bulletins (Old Version)


the problem in this clip was that I presented news that recently had happened which wouldn't be aloud. Another problem was that it took too long to get into the news (it was too spread apart)

My Radio Show (Old Version)



In this clip there are a lot of errors as I'm presenting the show. First of all in some parts my voice wasn't clear and it was hard for listeners to make out what I was saying, I kept pausing and not speaking clear enough. Also a lack of confidence whilst I was reading out the script for example.... I wasn't loud enough and exciting. One other error is that I go straight into the show by presenting my guest and pause him which I shouldn't have done.