My first Preliminary script

Wednesday 17th November 2010 - I wrote my first scrip for my preliminary task:

Preliminary

The I.O.M. Football Live Show

-          Jingle introducing the show

Presenter – good afternoon! Its one o’clock and its time for the I.O.M. Football Live Show.         (Another short Jingle)

Presenter – I’m Edwin Richardson and today we have a very special guest! He’s a footballing legend and we were lucky to catch him at the Isle Of Man 2010 charity match were other legends were also there doing their bit for charity. Today he has agreed to come and talk to us about his successful career.  (Commentary of Eric Cantona scoring the goal in the F.A CUP Final vs. Liverpool)

Presenter – would you please give a warm welcome to Eric Cantona!  (CLAP, CLAP, CLAP)

Eric – Thank You Very Much!

Presenter – Eric it’s an absolute honour having you here with us today

Eric – My pleasure

Presenter – Eric what brings you to Isle of Man?

Eric – Well I heard that some of the Man United legends were coming over to for a charity match and I thought I would come and watch some of my old team mate’s play and visit this beautiful island

Presenter – You’ve had an amazing career scoring many goals but what was your most memorable goal as a Manchester United player?

My most memorable goal would have to be in the F.A CUP Final against Liverpool when the ball came back out to me from a corner and I volleyed it in the bottom right corner of the net, the “FEELING” and the “FANS” from scoring that goal was AMAZING!

Presenter – Definitely one of my favourite goal as well, now since you have retired have you thought of maybe one day starting a coaching career?

Eric – Well at the moment I’m coaching the French beach National team

Presenter – Fantastic!

Eric – But you never know in life maybe one day I could come back and even coach Man United which would be a dream come true!

Presenter – well ladies and gentlemen you’ve heard it from the man himself (Eric Cantona) and unfortunately that’s all we have time for, Eric it has been an absolute honour having you here on the show                         

        

         Eric – My pleasure                                                                                                                                                                                        

       Presenter - and we’d love to have you back on the show again.  

Presenter – well that’s it for the I.O.M. Football Live Show, but before we go would you please give a huge round of applause for Eric Cantona ( CLAP, CLAP, CLAP)  stay tuned for next week when we will have another special guest in for you, but for now from me and all the team here.... Goodbye!

After getting some feedback from my teacher and reading the script over and over a couple of times I realised that the script wasn't good because it didn't sound like a radio show, so I had to start again and read the script to myself.